All Comments on 'Perfection'

by vixen_2006

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FifthFlowerFifthFlowerover 16 years ago
Nice ending

I liked the last three lines. It is interesting that one should want to hold onto someone out of possessiveness even though one doesn't really want them. Lines about the partner finding their own way were confusing, however.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
perfection....

confussing others while yet others perfect it (~_~) thanks for the read!

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