All Comments on 'Pimp Of Pleasure ...'

Hopped on the train and enjoyed the ride.

I like gutsy poetry that doesn't stumble

and ends with a well chosen close at

the right time.

There's a couple of things I might change

but, I'm not going there right now.

I just wanted you to know this worked

for me.

andy

some interesting inner rhymes in this one. You could lose the word "seizures" and rework the line breaks to make it more effective. I liked this one a lot-- good work :)

I assume we pimp ourselves out in many ways... such as work <grin and then there is sex <biggergrin' (~_*) a super, erotic read!

may prosper. I guess it depends on what you are telling, and to whom.

Well...I'm pretty sure the boat referred to isn't the Good Ship Lolipop. I have to say - I liked this poem. Didn't understand it all - but I liked it!

boats rowing on this ocean...big smile...blue

This poem floats my boat and I'm begging for more.