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jthserrajthserraabout 14 years ago
another good one

I really liked the ending, the irony that amid the noise of your playlist you dance in your silent prison. Apart from a word or two you might want to trim, the poem flowed nicely. I really liked the music forming a patchwork quilt which blankets you and yet gives you the security you need to consider escape. Nicely done.

jth

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