Poetry decoder ring

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I find some poetry hard to decifer
and I want to understand,
the poem's true meaning.

So I invented a poetry decoder ring
it works on a series,
of tiny little pings.

Just scan the poem in its intirety
with the rings round end,
let the decifering begin.

I find that even the ring gets confussed
it always seems to say
please begin again.


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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Huh???

Please again begin,

obscure and deep are not the same;

the fault is not the ring,

but in the poet's convoluted mind

With patent pending the publishers package

with every book of verse on sale

the key to understanding

but all it says is please, again begin

please, again begin, please, again............

absintheminddgrlabsintheminddgrlalmost 19 years ago
;)

I need one for my own stuff! LOL

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
That ring...

would be a very useful invention although it would somehow take away some of the poem's mystery. Sometimes it's interesting to try and decipher them and they can also hold several different meanings, depending on one's personal perception.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i'll try my.....

best to make my next poem one that you will be able to use this to test out its deciphering mechanisms. i dig this poem. nice job...........don

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 19 years ago
**5**

HAHA!! I need one of those rings BIG TIME!!! :)

GOOD ONE ZMA!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I for one

am not for allowing any new fangled ring to decode my muse...luv it...smiles/blue

always_smilingalways_smilingalmost 19 years ago
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Exactly!

This is excellent. Thanks for sharing.

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Well...

ain't THAT the truth! If you have a patent on that poetry decoder ring, I would like to be the first to place an order for one! I really enjoy reading the poetry presented here on Lit, but find Myself very frustrated when I come across one that I know is good {just by the "feel" of it}, but simply don't understand. I get the idea that I'm missing out on something I would truly enjoy and it makes matters worse. You just need to iron out the kinks with that ring, Art. You need to eliminate the "please begin again" mode and get it to where it's less confused than us! <grinnin'>

Vixxx

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
we

all find our own meanings Art.

Nice poem though

liked it.

Thanks.

~ J

templemindedtemplemindedalmost 19 years ago
excellent

excellent frame of mind

love,

nin-

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