All Comments on 'Quivering Quill'

Maybe this is not where you want to dab your original quill, but try again, a good cum shot is always welcome, our ears and mouths are open and we await your lascivious spray.

If I am being to harsh just fuck me in the ass, sorry! You could do worse, but how much? That is the question? (I was of course referring to my ass not your colorful poem)

But there were some good moments

a little humility goes a bit better,

and it looks like you are trying to write poetry, word of advice

don't try to write "poetry", just write, learn poetry, write. most important read

Read and see how much

pulsating spurts

hurts

even if used in an indirect matter (point for that)

but didn't vote

Not Non de Plume ! 5-ed.

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