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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bahahaha

Brilliant, stunning, marvelous. -Your biggest fan

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
It's Nom de Plume

Not Non de Plume ! 5-ed.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
judging from respose

a little humility goes a bit better,

and it looks like you are trying to write poetry, word of advice

don't try to write "poetry", just write, learn poetry, write. most important read

Read and see how much

pulsating spurts

hurts

even if used in an indirect matter (point for that)

but didn't vote

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
A true 'NoN dePlume"

But there were some good moments

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
VERY PRETENTIOUS butt effort was exerted here

Maybe this is not where you want to dab your original quill, but try again, a good cum shot is always welcome, our ears and mouths are open and we await your lascivious spray.

If I am being to harsh just fuck me in the ass, sorry! You could do worse, but how much? That is the question? (I was of course referring to my ass not your colorful poem)

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