All Comments on 'Rage & Love'

You have a way of expressing the inner turmoil that we have all gone through at some point in our lives, if we are honest with ourselves. You are an excellent writer, D, don't ever be afraid to share your work with the world.

BTW, I get the first autographed copy. ;):D. Kisses! ~Minx

Lots of terrific stuff in this poem. The feeling of angst and agony in the first strophe was especially rich.

I think using consistent punctuation and capitals would have made it even more enjoyable. A couple places you also used rhyming schemes that seemed forced (First strophe ceiling/feeling and place/face two principle examples.) Eliminating these would really strengthen the poem.

Of the three poems of yours I've read, this is the strongest piece. Definitely above the other 2, but I think there's still a lot of room for improvement.

and very strong.

Raw real emotion bursts

from this piece and i

could see myself in your words.

Love is stronger than evil

love is stronger than death and

love always wins in the end.

Great poetry.

Thanks.

~ J

it is love that overcomes all other emotions and makes us reevaluate our lives.