- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Red Sky at Night
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Click here"Red sky at night is a shepherd's delight
Red sky in the morning is a sailor's warning"
"Where does the sun go at night Joe?"
"It shines for them kids in Australia Petey
it's all fair and proper."
"Do they have bread 'n drippin' for supper too Joe?"
"Don't spose so Petey they eats kangaroos."
"Do they play on the bomb sites too and collect shrapnel,
did their daddies never come home?"
"Time for bed Petey, it's blackout time."
Red and gold streaks bathe the sky
promising hope for a new tomorrow
epitomising us if we did but know it,
two raggedy assed Cockney kids of the 40's
holding hands and watching the sun go down
over Hackney Gasworks.
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- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agoI'm not going to add to what was already said, I saw the score, who'd you PO, left a 5, I was looking for a comment, I thought I saw, I found it.
epitomising kind of sticks out, but not sorely.
greenmountaineerover 14 years agoI'm a sucker for any poem about the horror of war, particulary WWII, my parent's generation, the stories of which I do remember. As some of us say on this side of the pond, you nailed it. You inferred so much without having to say so much in a concise, vivid narrative. That's the kind of poetry I like, regardless of theme. Well done. Thank you.
champagne1982over 14 years agoAre crammed to the top with evocative and wonderful poetry. I can see their faces as they gazed out the garret and wondered about the dawn. Thanks for the poetry and congrats on the E.
Iraniaover 14 years agoWhat a joy to wake up and read. I felt the words in my belly. Raney
Anonymousover 14 years agoCongrats on your green E. I found it very interesting. You'll still hear my usual plea for commas... LOL
Of course, I'll be mentioning it in today's review when I get a chance to write it.
