All Comments on 'Redacted'

Excellent poem. Very original and exciting phrasing.

You already know I love this. Every time I read it I take something else away. Can I wear it like a sweater, dear Bluey? It fits me so well.

Got this one on my hands, then in my hair, around the house, on the furniture, the sofa, my pants, the doorknob. All good.

Your last four lines, particularly, were so juicy and perfect they just took off the top of my head. Extraordinarily well done.

jewel from a lovely flower. Just lovely.

this one DID make me purr. Very well executed, Ms. Bell. More please

And I'm not just saying that. A beautifully constructed piece of art. You have a staggeringly impressive talent.