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My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
release~

grip in the words of your poem release <grin>

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Dare I say it?~

This was a Shattering experience.~~~!! The flow was great..The saddness at first was felt, almost a desperation..*Smiles*~Then you snuck up and grabbed us with the last few lines. I love that in a poem...More Please~~!!

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Release~

This Poem was mentioned in the "New Poem Review" thread~

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I don't usually like...

...poems dwelling on depressing things but this one has a positive twist at the end and made me glad I read it through.

bordeauxbordeauxover 19 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

No, this one wasn't a personal experience. It just came to me while I was writing something else, actually. Thank you all for your feedback. :)

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