by bordeaux
This was a Shattering experience.~~~!! The flow was great..The saddness at first was felt, almost a desperation..*Smiles*~Then you snuck up and grabbed us with the last few lines. I love that in a poem...More Please~~!!
...poems dwelling on depressing things but this one has a positive twist at the end and made me glad I read it through.
No, this one wasn't a personal experience. It just came to me while I was writing something else, actually. Thank you all for your feedback. :)