All Comments on 'Rhyming-itis'

This is quite enjoyable!!

rhymes are like a song that you hear and you just can't get it out of your mind......lol/blue

cute!! And how true!! ;)

kisses,

T

thanks Art, you never fail to place a smile on my lips. Sabina. <I blow a kiss in your direction>

I think it would sound better if you rhymed. (grin)

~Syn

Cute little poem!

your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

Rhyming poems aren't so bad! And you, dear Art - please don't be sad! 'Cause if you didn't write such prose... We wouldn't be reading "A Cherokee Rose" <grinnin'>

Vixxx

I REALLY like your poetry!! But I dont undrestand all about this one. It must be to much Zen for me. I just dont read any rhyme. Why is it named Rhyming-itis . It dont rhyme when I read this poetry?? I do REALLY like it!!

This was adorable. :) Thank you for sharing!

the same compulsion about writing poetry and making sure everything rhymes.

creative poem art, and a catchy title too. i like stuff like this!!.........don

Can't get over this one ART... too cool! ;)

can't wait for your chapter of Bare Bottom Resorts to post! ;) it's gonna be an interesting chain judging from the authors we have onboard so far! ;)

kisses babe,

T

Now that's good, when you pull the rhyme from the reader's mind. Nice and light with chuckles to spare.

Great job! :)

If I had the time

A few words I would say

And critique your...

Verse.

Your poem brought a little smile

That will stay on my face

For a ...

minute (or two.)

I promise I'll stop

Trying not to rhyme

This verse just seemed to...

founder.