by foehn2
Foehn, this is absolutely lovely.
Quite a tribute!
hope to see more from you, soon :)
julie
this poem was mentioned in Friday's poetry review in the poetry forum.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=24002093#post24002093
How terrific to see you back! Wonderful use of form and I've always loved your lady poems, anyway. So what a perfect way to reacquaint myself with your voice.
Carrie.
a little forced, and not quite right - I'll blame it on the form. A lesser poets plight would be to make it so much worse. And I would have like to seen it expressed as free verse.
Welcome back, foehn. Too.