All Comments on 'Rondeau for Rhonda'

by foehn2

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swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
Beautiful

Lucky Rhonda! *smile*

ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
welcome back!!

Foehn, this is absolutely lovely.

Quite a tribute!

hope to see more from you, soon :)

julie

ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
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this poem was mentioned in Friday's poetry review in the poetry forum.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=24002093#post24002093

champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
:)

How terrific to see you back! Wonderful use of form and I've always loved your lady poems, anyway. So what a perfect way to reacquaint myself with your voice.

Carrie.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
a welcome.....

...read! missed your poetic pen, amigo. (~_~)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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a little forced, and not quite right - I'll blame it on the form. A lesser poets plight would be to make it so much worse. And I would have like to seen it expressed as free verse.

Welcome back, foehn. Too.

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