by foehn2
a little forced, and not quite right - I'll blame it on the form. A lesser poets plight would be to make it so much worse. And I would have like to seen it expressed as free verse.
Welcome back, foehn. Too.
How terrific to see you back! Wonderful use of form and I've always loved your lady poems, anyway. So what a perfect way to reacquaint myself with your voice.
Carrie.
this poem was mentioned in Friday's poetry review in the poetry forum.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=24002093#post24002093
Foehn, this is absolutely lovely.
Quite a tribute!
hope to see more from you, soon :)
julie