All Comments on 'Rose'

If you're going to write in rhyming couplets do try to get the meter right

I am giving you four because I am kind of flattered.

it is saying what you want to say. however, to achieve a more polished poem, you now need to keep a grip of those sentiments and work out a better way of saying what you want to say.

never force a line to get the rhyme. it's better to allow your poem to find its way like a river running naturally than to constrict it with ugly concrete banks.

good luck and keep writing!