All Comments on 'Seduction'

A different style from your usual poems, petals, and I had to read it more than once. But then, I always read your poems more than once.

Stop trying so hard to make your poems rythm, by doing that you ruining the poem and what it is about, you have some good ideas i just don't think you're talented enough to express them in a poem. Well at least skip69 likes it so your guarenteed at least 1 vote!