All Comments on 'semi-sugar coated'

on the E

I like the images you painted in my mind, esp

'i suck at math

and can't define you in those

technical sex terms

that are strung together

by numbers instead of letters'

Thanks for the read

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

the poem begins to takeoff with "i suck at math"...dunno, might be a better starting point, but you got something here...thanks.

Well earned E! I love the last lines -

"....to bathe, before it fades

in the blinding light of bone-crushing

love i have for you. "

Any lover would swoon.

Tess

This is a well earned E. Very nice flow and interesting phrasing, creating a intriguing image on a whole.

I suck

at math, too

love the attitude in this piece :D

congrats on the E, dear birthday buddy o' mine :D

I love it !! Sexy, hot and very devotional in a poetic kinda way ~ *grins* Love the flow, and the imagery. I feel you here my friend and get it ... I so get it ~

Bravo on the E ...

Great to see you back, missed ya !!!

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