All Comments on 'Sonnet 2 -- Twisting in the Wind'

You've really worked the theme well through the limits of the form. I especially like the way you make enjambment work for you (rather than ending every sentence on a line, which creates a sing-songy feel).

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

You've progressed quite well in your work with the form. You've put substance in {compared to sonnet 1} yet kept true to the form and, as Angeline notes, worked well with your enjambment.

I loved this piece! It really looks like you worked it carefully. What I very freely call the syncopation of the rhythm (what both Angeline and LeBroz referred to as enjambment) fits so well to the atmosphere of uncertain relations.