Spirit Solution Sense

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10 physical dimensions, differentiable manifolds, tangent bundles,
vibrating strings. Time, position, momentum and more.
Bosons, fermions, photons, neurons, emoticons, crayons;
cons of our consciousness.
I imaging my mother behind clouds, watching.
Neither troposphere nor stratosphere, is heaven where ?
Does she understand me more ?
I want to watch California slice subduct under Alaska when I'm there.
More dimensions folded in – factor in our forces.
Think thoughts find feelings from folds of brain or thriving there?
Ghosts glow in grass or a notion in nook of our noggin?
Can we touch together tearing time, axes apart?
Higher power helps hold road to happy destiny.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Worse than my sobrinos fridge magnet efforts.

Only kidding!! Thanks for sharing, Mancelt.

TzaraTzaraalmost 15 years ago
Kind of fun, EO,

but I don't know that I think it adds up to much, at least for me. Props for writing a poem that mentions string theory, though. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Interesting

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