All Comments on 'Summer Time'

and love is in the air. TK U MLJ LV NV

Beautiful as always

Your poems ALWAYS have a message of love nicely put, A reach to the stars,

Even in BDS which only perhaps, SM believers should vote score on, I couldn't,- but wud not insult the writ, However I have to say the poet in U, Needs to word play more, Develop a little oblique in rhyme. So it reveals the same, but in symetical twist style. You.

Changeth opening line and use punc, Even if all that folows is the Whys, Of a defining opening line.