All Comments on 'tease'

The only thing that could have made this even better would be if the poet had caught the repetition of over in the opening. Sure, there's some small use of popular phrasing in this but I really think the cliche is balanced by the unique view and well-written bondage theme. It's good.

I like how it ends with connection and, yeah, drop "over" in the first line.

Very sensual, good use of words.