All Comments on 'That time again'

Not sure about that last line, but I'm still giving it a five.

about any of the lines and not voting because of that. The entire thing is one overused line after another and since you took the time to think it out, i will be honest with you AND sign my name.

Read poetry and I do not mean the poetry here. some of it is okay, but most of it isn't what you would want to aspire to, is it?

Find some good old poets, or good contemporary poets and read them, a LOT! You will rarely see the lines you have written used by any good poets, and they are used extensively here. I bet you have a grand imagination, so use it!

Take the "cool satin sheets" and try to think of five different ways you can describe those sheets without using cool or satin and then try another way to say sheets and then you will get my five!

keep reading and writing, it is the only way to learn and perfect your craft.

~ maria