All Comments on 'The Affair'

by jenniferleigh

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
a neglected wife stumbles into .......

adultery : this Neglected Wife device has been used by you in a story too Jen : 5-ed just for the heart-break & cunning deviousness of the protagonist

jenniferleighjenniferleighover 9 years agoAuthor
I infuse my feelings into my writing

I haven't had an affair, but I do write what I know. And I know about feeling abandoned.

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
Needs must when the devil drives

Who do I feel sorry for here? I'm with...

Very good 5ed

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
New thrills

Final stanza explains it all, coupled with "A union made in lust." Oh the torment in seeking new thrills.

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