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by Wyld_Cat

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Great work, Wyld_Cat. Bring us more?

Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Beastly verse

I was with you up until: 'I am inside of me' - which is meaningless. Then after a great build of aggression and virility, the ground is cut from under the narrator with a humble apology. A better last verse might strengthen the ending.

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