by WilliamButlerYeats
A great piece! The alliteration in the first stanza (and the title) is one of the most beautifully sounding examples I have ever seen. The best poem I've seen here in awhile. 5 all the way.
Do you have a thing about geese?! :) 2nd stanza 3rd line would read better with a comma after 'where' and 'cool' but good read thank you
is the alliteration at the end is better (to each his own) nicely done 5
......have a thing for Canadian geese and I love this poem. Mr Yeats knows his geese.
Tess + 5