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by Butterflies512

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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago

Your poems have good flow and rhythm. I don't think the first line adds much to the poem, and you may want to consider selective use of capitalization.

Butterflies512Butterflies512over 11 years agoAuthor
The asylum

Tazz, if it turns out I am crazy, I will be checking into the asylum. I promise.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AND WHEN TROUBLE APPEARS

call the asylum. TK U MLJ LV NV

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