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by demure101
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Ashesh9over 11 years agoCrouchin ' Dragon , Fearful World !
For instance everybody's scared of China ---Vietnam , Japan , Phillipines , India , Obama .....
SweetOblivionover 11 years agoA pleasant if inconsistent verse
It works to a degree, but you could improve it with a good edit - some lines seem a little jerky and one of the stanzas is a line short for instance - but it is effectively delivered for the most part nonetheless. Sweet O
HarryHillover 11 years agoYou caught my attention
with this one Demure... nice ..a fellow dragon lover
tazz317over 11 years agoALL DRAGONS HAVE RIGHT TO COMPLAIN
them being a species ended. TK U MLJ LV NV
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