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PoetGuyPoetGuyover 13 years ago
A reasonable sonnet, though at times a bit hard to follow.

Poet Guy applauds the use of caesura to break up the normally steady dah-DAH dah-DAH da-DAH of the iambic line, and particularly likes the insertion of a feminine end-rhyme (flatter/matter) to mix up the sound of the poem. The use of the word "rhyme" seemed a bit forced to Poet Guy, but overall he found the sonnet pleasing, if not exceptional. Thanks.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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little to add, except best of the day;score 100

More: irritated mien

Less: storm at sea

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
I'm with poetguy.

I found it hard to follow and I did enjoy the 'irritated mien' comment but not being an expert in the more classical forms of poetry, I'll refrain from further comment.

LadyGenevieveLadyGenevieveover 13 years ago

Magnifiquement écrite

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