All Comments on 'Those Raven Summer Nights'

I love English, The language.

Even though I know sweet fa about grammar, and sentence structure. And I seldom understand poetry, at all.

I, like most aussie kids, learnt Patterson's "The Man from Snowy River", what I liked about it was it rhymed. That's all.

But I loved Poe's "The Raven", and the Simpsons telling of it just reaffirmed it for me.

I've not come across "Quoth the Server 404".

May I ask if you've come across "Abort, Retry, Ignore"?

Delightful romp. A retelling, a la Neil Gaiman . . . with autobiographical caresses?

Has your touch, timing and wit. Could be habit forming though. Very enjoyable, so, of course, would like to read more.

T.

There is nothing to fear when I go into one of your efforts. They are always entertaining and fun to read, usually a couple of times through and always a 5 star rating.

Thanks for the submission,

Keep us alerted

What fun! I'm embarrassed (not really) to admit I'm not a huge fan of The Simpson's, so had no expectations before reading this. As usual, I loved your offering.

Not bad at all. But don't over do it. Love your erotica more. Good to be versatile though

. Mike

First, kudos for attempting it. I know those creative juices couldn't be contained by mere erotica (though you do that very well. :))

BUT...(and you already knew this)...a poet you are not. It's good to stretch your wings and try something new, and my hat's off to you for that. But you should stick to prose. (I say that with all affection, btw.)

But if you decide to tackle some T.S. Eliot, let me know. I'd love to see your take on "The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock". :)

Belinda is my favorite writer at Lit;

Her tales weave with erotic-laced wit.

I read all she writes, and wait for the next;

Then take time to enjoy, and linger in her text.

This poem is great, it is clever with class;

But I like my stanzas with alot more ass.

Like maybe have Sandy do a fellate;

Then, your poem I could really celebrate!

you named several of the "Old Masters"" TK U MLJ LV NV