All Comments on 'Tiptoes and Two Lips'

Looks like someone's having fun here.

in the hand is worth two in the bush.

happiness ~ depends on whose bush we're talking about.

loved it! each verse made me smile. And there was no need for the pseudo-apology at the end, you done good!!!

:)

You had enough here even in the first two stanzas. They could stand alone as two Haiku like poems.

Charming with the combination of passion yearning and volunarability. I second Mary's sentiment on your prowess. No need for apologies.