All Comments on 'Tiptoes and Two Lips'

You had enough here even in the first two stanzas. They could stand alone as two Haiku like poems.

Charming with the combination of passion yearning and volunarability. I second Mary's sentiment on your prowess. No need for apologies.

loved it! each verse made me smile. And there was no need for the pseudo-apology at the end, you done good!!!

:)

happiness ~ depends on whose bush we're talking about.

in the hand is worth two in the bush.

Looks like someone's having fun here.