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Tomatoz, Pepperz, and Butter Beanz

byHarryHill©

They're back,
stealthy sprite's, slippin'
'cross my sight,
buzzin' 'round the garden.

They've had their way
with the tomatoz,
whose blush betrays tomfoolery
by little busy fairy hands,
leaving round bums aflame,
green panties at ankles.

The butter beanz show
signs of impish inclination,
braided pods like dreadlocks,
falling from leafy brows,
beez grazing on the flowers
tucked throughout green hair.

And the pepperz,
just waiting to be pulled and stuffed.
Magic.

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by Tsotha05/04/14

My first read through led me through a garden, with some slightly pervy sprites without knickers having fun polishing vegetables and braiding flowers. I thought it was nicely written, and a well constructedmore...

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by Anonymous10/13/13

5ed

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by todski2808/16/13

Cheeky word play

I enjoyed the rhythm of the piece,
read tristess2 comment and both 1201s I initially agreed with Tess, but the Z is what I think helps your allusion and alignment, I wrote it out in my head with the smore...

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by twelveoone08/16/13

here is a real comment

this poem is far better than even you, harry, may think. My previous comment, was predicated by the fact of annoyance of the lack of depth on some of yours. the real strength in this poem is everythingmore...

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by twelveoone08/15/13

beez, jeez

have you been paid a visit by the deaz
I know my comments should be more substantial
stealthy sprite's, slippin'
Nice alliterationz
i 5ed

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