by keacreme
I am not missing the point of the poem, I truly enjoyed it.
I especially like the layout and how you can read the left-column words in a different order alongside the right side and get new meanings.
I have been reading through your submissions, so far I have not been disappointed. Keep up the good work!
Your creativity and originality never ceases to amaze. There are so many ways to read this that keeps rereading it fresh each time.
that certainly leaves food for thought...well done.