All Comments on 'Unrequited Love'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 12 years ago
Twilight 101 !

Redux !!?

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THIS ONE SIDE AFFAIR

holds no future for either party in any sense of form. TK U MLJ LV NV

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Nice flow

Very good rhythm - watch the punctuation in 4th stanza - smiles Sweet O.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Oh my!

A Promethean feast, eh? With the heart of the poor unloved as the ironic main course! Painful!

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