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Another gem you have here,

You always manage to capture

the essence and feelings of

love the same way I would.

You write beautifully of true

love and longing and it touches

my heart every time.

Nicely done my friend.

~ Jenn

I like it a lot, but the end was a bummer. I would loose

the last three lines. I know they might be the reason

for the piece, but I say don't give the sucker a way out. sandspike

us .... a perfect subject with your charming literary way <grin> nice poem RF