All Comments on 'whispers through the frost'

Beautiful language, uplifting message. This would be a delightful poem to hear. There's an abundance soft sounding consonants in the first stanza which to my mind set a soft mood. The first 3 lines of the second stanza turn the narrative and, I think, the reader's attention, with harsher sounding consonants before "they whispered through the heart to me" and the concluding stanza.

This is all so subliminal. I don't know to what extent it was intuitive or deliberate on your part, but the way you combined sound with structure made it more than "just another flower poem" for me.

I also liked the inverted pairing of "promise born." Perhaps for that reason, I'm not convinced "your soul abounds" was necessary.

Delightful poem, SpringBreezes, just delightful.

You write brilliantly spring glad to see this mentioned in the poetry forum 5ed

but not his cousin Grim. TK U MLJ LV NV