by Poppin Poppy
Will never be a poet, pls give up now and spare us all your terrible crappy poems!
your terrible crappy poems! <<<<<
the fish is on a rampage? sorry poppin
some will rub ya like sand paper in life,
like leaning tired against a jagged rock
you want to know what I like?
I like nicer critics <grin>
then there are those into more
self devastating remarks
You want to know what I like?
I liked your poem~
Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey~
poppin.....may I make a suggestion...try working in free verse...you sound like you're straining to maintain a rhyme every other line...relax a little...let your mind open up...let the thoughts flow without worrying about finding the right rhyming word...