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poppin.....may I make a suggestion...try working in free verse...you sound like you're straining to maintain a rhyme every other line...relax a little...let your mind open up...let the thoughts flow without worrying about finding the right rhyming word...

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey~

your terrible crappy poems! <<<<<

the fish is on a rampage? sorry poppin

some will rub ya like sand paper in life,

like leaning tired against a jagged rock

you want to know what I like?

I like nicer critics <grin>

then there are those into more

self devastating remarks

You want to know what I like?

I liked your poem~

Will never be a poet, pls give up now and spare us all your terrible crappy poems!