All Comments on 'Your Love'

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Love making and fucking

sometimes one and the same - sometimes not - thought well captured.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

I do feel your desire in this piece. Enjoyably erotic.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Feelmydesire :

Guess this poem really makes the Reader feel your desire !!

feelmydesirefeelmydesireover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

I'm glad people are reading and enjoying this. I wrote it for my wife years ago before we were engaged.

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