All Comments on 'ZMP ~ today's water'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Insightful offering, as always

and glad my small thought could help

but it's easy to do when inspired

by the clear-seeing Zen of your mind

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeover 18 years ago
Good

Light and flowing, a little bit silly at times ("a day again dawned / as it does everyday"?) but still a notch above the norm. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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a twisting current that ripples through the mind is this ZMP. Nice and flowing dear Art..

du

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
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I LOVE ZMPS!!! This one is very GREAT!!! I think waves at thr beach are the same but different to!!!

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