All Comments on '104'

I liked your story very much, interesting. You show imagination, hidden desires, wants, needs and the need for more. I applaud you, good luck to you in your furture writings

...please try not to end you stories like that again. It really was a great story and it was certainly hot, but I would have given you full marks were it not for the "it was only a dream" ending. It just looks as if you can't be bothered coming up with a real ending.

I liked it! It was good.

ohhh god! That was EXCELENT!!! No real rape so you don't feel bad for her but also going deeply into the rape & not abusing her. Evil & dirty but guiltless ^__^!!!

I love ladies with hot nasty minds. Made my cock Hard

A beautiful story well told,I know a lot of women who have similar

dreams, mine was being chassed, caught and roughly fucked.

and the same on waking I was tangled in the bedclothes my pussy

was swollen & soaking wet I didn't where the hell I was for a minute,so needteachin it must be a true story, but well told & so realistic must be quite a turn on for the men who read these tales

J

WOW! I really really liked the story, my fav part was that he really knew how to eat her (guess that's why it ended up being a dream, cause how many guys know how to do what we really like, really well):) I couldn't stop reading, & the only thing I disliked was the anal (but that's just a pers pref thing) & that she didn't kiss or suck someone off (again, another pers pref thing). Really loved the story, so don't take my 'personal preference complaints' to heart because we all have our own likes and dislikes. LOVED the absence of humiliation! GREAT STORY! Janie :)

I enjoyed your story so much that I wish I can make your dreams come true!

For different reasons, they dont't like a woman's hot desires, when I'm reading fiction, I don't like dreams.

It was so hot, why do you ruined it at the very end?

Your story kept me hard to the end. Though I would have prefered a different ending, I still enjoyed your dream.

Loved the story, but felt really let down by the ending.

very nice, I enjoyed it. Thanks so much. Steve

I love stories that start off noncon then the women can not help their desires. It make me want to leave my wife sunbathing in our yard all day! What a sight that would be to come home to.

Thanks

JMM1982000@yahoo.com

but hated the ending...

Good job!

ending was horrible though...

but awesome story.

Nast Hot well writen; Left me with hope of being the one to fill that fantasy.

Young Buck

Ended to soon! Like to hear that women have wet dreams too!

I have some of the same fantasies. Maybe not double teamed but being'had' by a large stranger would be really nice. ;) Great story.

I have to admit I agree with the other comments posted. The story was hot but I too felt let down by the ending. The whole dream thing is overdone. Other than that, great story.

Not a bad story, except the ending. That was not what I expected. There would have been better ways to end it.