All Comments on '14 Days To Redemption Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fantastic yet again

Loved it, can't wait to see how poor little Kelli reacts when Jack really pushes her. How I would love to find my Jack to take control. WOuld love to read more. x

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another Good One

Looks like it will be a long hard 14 days ! Brilliant story

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 12 years ago
but...

not sure how she reconciles her uptight christian beliefs with having an affair? That's the only bit that doesn't seem to ring true. Otherwise good going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More

Keep it going. The bitch needs to learn what is real...

missgitermissgiteralmost 12 years ago
Wow...

Wow, I can't wait to read more. This was... well, plainly put.. HOT. Can't wait to see what Jack has in store for little Kelli

-a

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
horahhh

Loving it so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
If it's not in the Bible?

So, no tv, no car, no flying? That ruling is so absurd. As for God is watching, yes he is, with pleasure as we enjoy his creative skills in the bodies he gave us.

Part of enjoying God is enjoying what he has given.

God's prohibitions are of things like adultery,theft, assault that harm ourselves and /or other people,

By the way 'pins and needles' are the body's way of telling us to move in order to avoid ,possibly fatal, thrombosis. So insisting on immobility could kill, unlikely, but how would you feel if that was the result of your actions?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh Yeah

God this made me so hard

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Fucking hot

JudyLeeJudyLeealmost 8 years ago
Next level.

She seems to be capitulating easily. I'm sure spanking her lets him release some of his anger over the last 7 years. A little pain during sex. Orgasm deprivation. Humiliation about her folks. I wonder if he really told them that. He has really thought this through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Religion

Whilst I appreciate that a lot of people find comfort in religion I can’t help but think it’s messed up as many people as it’s helped.

These days I treat it like sex and don’t judge, it fits in the school of thought of ‘whatever floats your boat’.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can think of a few women I wish I had treated this way in my past.

Thanks for the trip down Memory Lane. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

If her religion defines her life, how does her adultery fit in? Isn't that against the 10 commandments? Or her vows of marriage?

C_frommnC_frommnover 1 year ago

Nice way he is going about it. Not easy keeping her guessing and learning Mom & Dad don't know everything.

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