by DominAngel
I liked it. Sorry to say not the best story but pretty hot!!
Keep up the good work hun.
XOXO VIXXXEN
just, wonderful. So well written, erotic, sensual, loving it has it all. And the inclusion and repetition of the time, brings it all together in the most unique way. Perfect.
I absolutely loved the story. It was very well written, and i actually got lost in it. I read a lot of stories on this site and rate them, but this is the first time I'm actually commenting on a story. I'll definitely be keeping my eyes out for some more stories like this from you. Well done!!
Liked the way this story was written. What a rare treasure it is to have someone who knows you so intimately and still desires you everyday in everyway.
I felt a little frightened for her at first, but when I realized what was going on the tenderness of his feelings for her just swept me away. I'd love for someone to watch me like that.
Excellent! Beautiful erotic story. Just love to read more.
This is what I would love to have when, eventually, I am married and have children... It is so important to have and maintain a good sexual connection with one's spouse.