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Pinto931Pinto931about 1 month ago

I wouldn’t bothe4 with this. The author has spent 8 years writing the 8 parts and never finished it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

100%!!!!!

Bizzy_BishBizzy_Bishover 11 years ago
Love<3

I absolutely love this story! I need more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice!

Good start, but a little sloppy with the editing. (Watch out for 1st and 3rd person usage).

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Just found this

and it's a good start. Keep up the good work!

grunabonagrunabonaover 14 years ago
Excellent start

I sense a good writer in the making.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done!

It's a good start and I look forward to the next chapter. I honestly can't imagine why anyone would give this chapter a 0 unless he/she was just being an ass - so, don't let it bring you down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Go Nicole!

You go Nicole, get yourself some good white cock!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not certain what it's about or where

it could go, but as a snapshot of a moment in a relationship I enjoyed...Mancelt.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 14 years ago
Good start

It was short, well executed, and real...looking forward to the next installment!

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**081518. So this is really important. I recently went back and read my first story on this site, 34 Minutes. It had been a few years since I read it, and almost 10 years since I wrote it, so I was interested in seeing how things have changed and I've grown. But what I was ins...

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