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by AlmostAugust

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Not many stories make me jealous, but...

Holy Fuck !!!!!!!

chocolatecookie3chocolatecookie3about 11 years ago
Great Story

I liked how you set up the tension and it paid off in the end! You have some grammar mistakes and spelling (Devine should be Divine) but it is very good structurally.

phd70phd70almost 11 years ago
There were clues!

His 'real' girlfriend did not use his name 'jack', but the sister did while the 'real' girl- friend was out of town. Also, the 'real'. girlfriend did not like anal, and the sister did.

still a fun story! 4 Stars!

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