by Oldguy45
Cliff was a bit of a douchebag in this one... first he almost cheats on Tad, then he forces him into sex when Tad gets home... not good.
for me by bringing a blood woman into it. i lost complete intrest in that .. and when tad came back from his other lover you didnt pick that story up.? RUBBISH
This is skirting on the edge. He promised Tad they'd be exclusive, but starts looking at women as soon as Tad leaves town; Tad is tired and doesn't want anal, but he goes ahead anyway? Your main character/narrator is a selfish prick.