by Oldguy45
This is skirting on the edge. He promised Tad they'd be exclusive, but starts looking at women as soon as Tad leaves town; Tad is tired and doesn't want anal, but he goes ahead anyway? Your main character/narrator is a selfish prick.
for me by bringing a blood woman into it. i lost complete intrest in that .. and when tad came back from his other lover you didnt pick that story up.? RUBBISH
Cliff was a bit of a douchebag in this one... first he almost cheats on Tad, then he forces him into sex when Tad gets home... not good.