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by Ed0613

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JorisKHuysmansJorisKHuysmansover 16 years ago
Funny story...

...interesting setup, but you could have prolonged the foreplay and not had them talk so matter of factly about getting right to it. Still, always glad to see a positive story about a big beautiful woman, I'll look for more of yours (and feel free to check out mine).

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...