All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise for Ricky'

that was the best story i've read on this website great descriptions

Not a bad story, but some of the details would be clearer if the paragraphs were more concise. If you switch characters who are performing an action or saying dialogue, it's probably a good idea to start a new paragraph. Also, the external ejaculation and the lubeless anal sex make this story seem like a porn movie in text form.

You story was very intriguing but to short...it could have used a little more build up and a little more playing for the 3-some but otherwise i liked it...keep up the good work.