by Woodchuckbdsm
Very good continuation.. I hope you involve Nathan playing with other girls as well. Keep up the great work.
Great follow-up with (yeah!)more to come.
BTW, any chance you could photocopy that magic book for me?
I like the way that he's evolving as a person and the way the book is affecting everything about him. Looking forward to ch. 3.
Thanks for a great start to a new story!
Great story line, and well written too. I just hope I don't have to wait too long for chapter 3.
The evolution of a master. Amazing clear and well ordered writing! Thank you and I can't wait for the next chapter.