by TonyDowse
Good read without rape, violence, or infidelity
Both my wife and I would love to read a part two to this story in the near future!
Wonderfully correct grammar and adult language made this a goriously romantic read. Thank you!
I loved the pleasing and very articulate forming of the lines of love... thanks
I would truly love to read the sequel to this story. So well written.
A delightful story The only thing that distracted me was when she called him Brian. You have a good style and your story flows well. A very pleasant romance.
Just found this story by accident. Really well written - I enjoyed it very much indeed. More please! :)
This was incredibly well written, I loved the characters and how easy it was to visualize the events. I thuroughly enjoyed the chaacters and plot. Absolutely amazing, I will definately be reading more of your work.
You write so well, so evocatively. I admire both the hotness and tenderness being expressed.
Splendid stuff - of dreams for older men like me
Martin UK
...having searched through a mountain of dross you come across something special and this story is pure gold.
Written in English with proper grammar, punctuation and a blessed dearth of typos you can concentrate on the story, woven skilfully and erotically around excellent characters.
Well done Tony!
What a great story! I enjoyed every word of it!! More please!
This is the first story of yours I've read and I will definitely be reading the rest. Thanks for your efforts.
What can I say, except "Yet another great story!"? I loved it for all the elements which I always enjoy, from the build-up, through the well-rounded and believable background material (location, circumstances, opportunity, etc), to the heart of the matter: the sex scenes. As ever, these are highly arousing, particularly when Millie allows him to continue what she started on the couch i.e. playing with herself. To be invited to join in such a session by such a lovely woman would be a dream come true.
Many thanks for another sexy and stimulating story.
Dafyyd.
A delicious, sensuous read, with a clever link between erotic literature and fictional 'reality'.
As usual, Tony gives a glimpse into his characters before they become physically involved. The build up is always good and the sex is always senuous.